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Reviewed in Australia on 8 June 2020
The story is good but the writing needs more eloquence; it seems to lack the substance this story needs. The different POVs are written in the same style so it's difficult to gain any real benefit from this technique of writing.
Having said that, the characters are interesting and the story is quite good so hopefully the final book ups the grammars game a little an gives us a polished and exciting end.