Top critical review
Well written but a bit slow at times
23 October 2019
This is another well written dungeon core story continuing the crafter slant in the genre. The originality is good, with plenty of creativity and new types of development for this unique dungeon. The overall story arc is well thought out, with a defined threat to the main races of this world. On the negative side of things the pacing of this story felt a bit slow at times. Lengthy crafting mechanic descriptions and loooong progressions through one dungeon room after another felt a bit of a grind with not enough spark or variety to carry you through. Maybe more interplay with another character would have helped. Overall a good read, but not as good as most of this Author’s work.