Top critical review
Would benefit from a good editing
Reviewed in Australia on 15 August 2019
The plot is interesting and the suspense builds well. Less convincing is the emotional build up, and it doesn’t feel sexy at all, mostly because it’s pretty hard to feel sexy when the female lead spends most of her time panicking about her face. Adjectives are overused to the point of pain, and the author says in 15 words what could be said in four, which makes the book drag. Female lead is (understandably, but annoyingly) a basket case for the bulk of the story. Great if you like the old knight in shining armor trope.