The Music & Mayhem.. had characters 'humming' hummed' ( perhaps intended to be 'hm' ?) This became a little distracting. The main character spoke in a stilted fashion and 'bowed' often- odd behavior for a young woman running a modern rock music club. I began to wonder if it was editing or whether the author was - for this book - a writing group rather than an individual. The plots were good.. but please... edit, edit and edit again?
In other books.. the author lost track of the characters .. basically and editing and continuity issue.. in one book one character was a fiancee, then a husband, then a fiancee.. all in the space of a page. In another, lines of dialogue seemed to be attributed to the incorrect characters.. perhaps this was an Amazon formatting issue.
This author would have done much better with decent editing.Or at least good beta readers,She has done some decent writing with some good plot work, but if I saw one inappropriate 'excitedly I feel like I saw a hundred!
Many of the stories were good. It is a shame that there were so many error in them. There were so many times that the names were muddled up. Not just in one book but about half of them. It was very distracting