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Pathetic Female thinks rich gorgeous man will save her with unplanned baby
13 March 2019
Could not even get half way through this . The main character just made me want to slap her. First she has random sex in public with a complete stranger. Difficult to believe with the previous character development and then thinks she may be pregnant BUT puts off doing a test. There was no exploration or even mention about whether she was going to keep the baby despite the fact she has no family support and no money and even her BEST FRIEND says she wont continue to live with her. Off to the clinic with you -you stupid girl. Secondly as if you would think he is coming back for you. I understand the whole concept of fantasy and romantic love and I love a knight in shining armour as much as anyone, but this was utter rubbish. Stop perpetuating the myth that babies will make someone want you. Everyone with an actual child know it is hard work and no way to start a new relationship. If I was this dude I would be staying in the warzone forever.