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Light hearted simple
13 April 2019
Hmm, it's a overly simple story, but that's where the grin sneaks in.
But so simple that the writing seems to have trouble with dealing with more then 1 or 2 people, with them just disappearing from existing until the main person in focus needs them or something to get them to react. Seeing as that was bert, a critter of very little character, it was very blank sheet story until the end when things went down.
If you like the preview you'll get to the end, but don't expect much development.