Top critical review
8 December 2018
I apologise to Mia Ford for this review! I have read several of her stories and enjoyed them. However I would say this is the Worst book EVER...
OMG the stilted conversations, stupid adults acting like children... it was weird, awkward, poorly written.
The dialogue was awful. The actual story was horrendous. A family sending their adult daughter away because she was pregnant out of wedlock and bringing shame to their family?!? It’s 2018 isn’t it!! The fact that a 23 year old woman gets sent away against her will and stays is completely insane. She is in love with a man but doesn't try to find a way to get in touch with him?
The word orphaniarium instead of orphanage was also distracting.
So while I love the brothers best friend trope I really couldn’t get into this book. I thought the writing was simplistic and superficial. I couldn’t picture the personalities of the characters. I have just given my first 1 star review.