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Lazy writing from a good author.
24 July 2018
I really love Glynn's work, but this 'book' was full of lazy writing. I really hope this isn't a sign of how the author is going to approach their future work in the already-established franchises of his.
One massive gripe was the use of '...' as a pause during someone talking. This was not tied to any single character, and as such cna only be put down to lazy writing on the authors behalf. I counted its use at least 40 times, and it was used for no reason. A character would be giving a speech and then there would be '...' for no reason. None at all. It wasn't for a thoughtful pause or anything, just really really lazy writing.
I'm really disappointed with this installment. Ir eally hope the author sees this and takes more care with their future work.