Top critical review
Good story, immature writing, poor editing
15 March 2018
Liked the idea and the actual story, but the writing and editing let it down for me.
The book needs at least one more edit and proof read as there were so many mistakes and issues with sentence structure, and mixing up tenses throughout. I love a good series but can't bring myself to buy any more of this series due to these issues. This might not bother some readers but it ruins the book for me.
The writing itself feels immature to me. This is the first book from this author that I've read, and maybe her writing has improved since this one. Not sure I'd buy any more based on this one.