Top critical review
Good social issues covered, but please check the editing before publishing
Reviewed in Australia on 8 December 2017
This is a story that had great promise. About halfway through, it appeared to have issues with grammar and spelling mistakes taking place, which distracted from the story. It also had the most abrupt finish that this type of book could have. No epilogue, no completion!! It almost seems like the author ran out of time to write thee story and had to quickly finish the document.
There were social issues raised in this story that haven't really been raised before, and it was good to see them, it just seems like the author 'heaped' a little too much on the main character, then could extricate them out of the situation.