Top critical review
9 April 2015
I almost gave up on this story, and towards the end I found myself skipping pages. The plot/storyline is good, however, the writing is terrible.
Sometimes I feel that some writers think their readers are dumb, or unable to comprehend what is going on. We readers don't need every little thing spelt out, we are very good at getting it.
This story has so much potential, however, that potential has been squandered. I will skim through the next instalment to find out what happens with Fallon and Luca, however, I won't be reading anymore of this author, she has lost me.
1.5 stars for me. The story idea would probably get more stars.