Top critical review
13 May 2014
I'm amazed this book wasn't self-published. It is really amateurish, in terms of writing, plot structure, character development (there is none). Main character is so unlikeable & so juvenile in her motivations & actions (eg refuses to divulge her real first name; shirks work responsibility as too preoccupied with a rumour), I was hoping she'd be the next murder victim. Most of the characters seemed like caricatures, or one-dimensional. Writing very clunky, with various errors (no editor? Bad editor?). Dialogue: terrible! Major plot hole re killer's motivation (with related/linked murders that are mentioned once & then never again). Abrupt & awkward ending.
Overall, a very poor story & badly-executed. Please do not waste your time and/or money. Don't even waste your time on the free e-book.