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Customer Review

9 April 2018
I understand that this is written for teenagers and I am not one, so take this as you will...

I think the story and concept is very good, however it lacked in it's execution. There are a lot of editing issues, i.e. no editing at all, which really detracted from the story. Also, the romance with Jerome and David nemesis seemed a little forced. A little subtlety goes a very long way! Perhaps I wouldn't have noticed this as a teenager, however self publishing was not a common or well respected thing when I was young so I really can't make that call.

Again, I think this could be a really great story if it was fleshed out a bit more and properly edited.
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