This series had the potential to be a great story but a couple of things annoyed me in this book. First thing was Jack Henry calling Laurelyn L. I don't find that adorable at all and the more it was used the more I hated it. I also got sick of Laurelyn at the start of this book, she seem to whinge all the time. She just seem to change from the other two books and so did Jack Henry but three quarter through the book got better. The pregnancy was a great touch to the story and the epilogue finished it nicely.