All I can say is that I thank goodness this book was free. I ordered this book based on the very high reveiws and raves that this author had on both this book and in other series in the hopes of finding a new author to follow. I was sadly disappointed. I couldn't quite get a hold on whether this was a young adult book with a whole bunch of sex added to it or a bad erotic novel that was for a younger audience - either way it didn't work for me. Being a short story and the beginning of the series there was no character depth and I found the overall writing style to be really annoying. I actually put this book down several times because I found it so painful - I realised I was already at the 86% mark on my kindle and decided to finish it anyway. What a waste of time. I recommend don't bother.