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Reviewed in Australia on 19 August 2020
I enjoyed this story. I loved Xander. The plot was good and kept me wanting to read right up to the end.

The story is written in first person, of which I am not a fan. It's told from the alternating viewpoints of Laura and Xander, but each time the pov changes, the current character goes back and relives what we have just read from the other character's pov, including dialogue. Sooo much repetition and so very annoying. This could have been handled much better. It was also a little difficult to keep track of from whose point of view we are reading. The first half of the book was the worst; it did improve a bit in the second half. I feel the story would have been much better if narrated in third person.
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