It’s a great story if you can ignore the editing errors.
In one spot, the wolf, Atla, is clearly described as female BY THE OWNER of the wolf. In another, the owner clearly refers to Atla as male. Then in the next scene with Atla, the wolf is female again. (FWIW, Titan has the same problem.)
In another section, it’s pointed out that Janine’s gripped loosened, but we were never told what Janine was gripping or how tightly. We never even knew Janine was holding anything at all.
These errors are lazy and beneath the effort put into writing such a complicated story. As much as I enjoy the overall storyline of this series, I’m not sure I want to continue.
- Paperback: 246 pages
- Publisher: CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform (24 February 2014)
- Language: English
- ISBN-10: 1495445429
- ISBN-13: 978-1495445422
- Product Dimensions: 15.2 x 1.6 x 22.9 cm
- Boxed-product Weight: 435 g
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