![Undeniable: An Unacceptables MC Standalone Romance by [Mazzola, Kristen Hope]](https://images-fe.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/41mEl-6-E9L._SY346_.jpg)
This was a pretty good read. I have read a few stories by this author and within this series, but all out of order. I was a bit lost with who the secondary characters were in this story, but it did not affect my enjoyment of the plot.
There were a few minor editing errors but nothing too distracting. I enjoyed the plot and the characters of Cassidy and Ryan, their love is everlasting. I understand that this was a novella, but it seemed a bit too easy, to simple, and very low in angst. I did not care for how easy they finally got together.
The epilogue is so very sweet and the perfect ending to this story. I will read more from this author and finish this series.
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One thing that made this a four star book for me (and this is purely a personal reason), is the ending of the story. I very much dislike stories where a character has to give up something in order to please the other; especially when they go into the relationship with eyes open. Ryan gave up the MC, a brotherhood and family, that helped him become then man he is and helped him deal with his grief and anger over losing his brother. There is a line in the story where we learn that Cassidy will not stay be with him if he stays in the MC. I find it selfish of Cassidy to ask Ryan to give up part of himself for her, EVEN if he is willing. Again, this is purely my personal pet peeve.
Product Description
Best Selling Noir & Vigilante Justice Novella
Ryan Axston may have been my brother's best friend, but he is so much more than that to me...He was my first everything. Kiss. Sexual encounter. Love. Ax had my whole heart, but he had no freaking clue.
He always wanted to be a Marine. It was in his blood. The day his brother was shipped home in a body bag, Ax signed up and left town to do his duty to his country.
I forced myself to move on. I really thought he was gone forever.
When he showed back up wearing the Unacceptables' skull and bones on his back ten years later, I thought I'd be able to fight all the old feelings I had for Ax. I was older and wiser.
But all he had to do was crook his finger and it was as if I was 17 all over again. I wasn't willing to sit back and let him tear us apart again. This time I was going to fight for what I wanted. But not even my love could stop a bullet. One of us was going to have to make a life-altering choice. Would it be me, or him?
Undeniable was previously released in Susan Stoker's Kindle World: Delta Force Heroes. This story has been rewritten and reedited to remove all world elements and characters of Susan Stoker’s world.
Ryan Axston may have been my brother's best friend, but he is so much more than that to me...He was my first everything. Kiss. Sexual encounter. Love. Ax had my whole heart, but he had no freaking clue.
He always wanted to be a Marine. It was in his blood. The day his brother was shipped home in a body bag, Ax signed up and left town to do his duty to his country.
I forced myself to move on. I really thought he was gone forever.
When he showed back up wearing the Unacceptables' skull and bones on his back ten years later, I thought I'd be able to fight all the old feelings I had for Ax. I was older and wiser.
But all he had to do was crook his finger and it was as if I was 17 all over again. I wasn't willing to sit back and let him tear us apart again. This time I was going to fight for what I wanted. But not even my love could stop a bullet. One of us was going to have to make a life-altering choice. Would it be me, or him?
Undeniable was previously released in Susan Stoker's Kindle World: Delta Force Heroes. This story has been rewritten and reedited to remove all world elements and characters of Susan Stoker’s world.
