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Pre-editing: style 71% spelling 100%grammar 82%overall 84%
Post-editing: style 71%spelling 100%grammar 92%overall 88%
Final summary: style 91% spelling 100%grammar 92%overall 94%
Grammar lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of employing excess introductory/gerund clauses, which makes for faster reading.
Style lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of an abundance of introductory/gerund clauses that makes for faster reading. As a result, these books use 10% to 15% fewer coordinators. Style will all be subjective to both the reader and the writer.
Summary: the pre-edit score of 84% increased to 88%. The remaining is based primarily on style. Is it perfect? No, but statistically speaking and taking into account style, it is 94%+ correct.
Please keep in mind that not all of the recommendations were correct, thus I omitted them.
Dialog tagged: 14.70%
Passive index: 3 (target < 25)
Felsch Reading Ease: 84 (Target >60)
Glue index: 45.9% (target <40%)
Easy to read paragraphs: 1441 (95%)
Less Easy paragraphs to read: 59 (4%)
More difficult paragraphs to read : 20 (1%)
438 adverbs (309 outside of dialog) & only 2 are used more than 10 times