It can be difficult at best understanding the author's aim, focus, goal, etc when reading a story. In SSFS, I didn't get it at all. There were missed opportunities, IMHO, for character development and plot development that would have made it a much better story while still allowing it to be a short story. The sex scenes were lukewarm and the ending unsatisfying.
This story could be re-worked and be outstanding because it DOES have a great premise, but as it is now, it's just lacking. It wouldn't have been any better had it been free, but at $2.99 for less than 50 bad pages, it was an insult.
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Sexy Suitors from Space: SciFi Alien Erotica Kindle Edition
- ASIN : B00JJ4X3A2
- Language : English
- File size : 1798 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 49 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: 1,893,764 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- Customer Reviews:
2 out of 5
1 global rating