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Excellent read from start to finish loved the topic we no longer talk about yet are sadistic, sexy ,erotic and romantic all in one ,love this series enjoyed them all
3.0 out of 5 starsGreat story premise, awful editing
Reviewed in the United States on 3 May 2019
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This is an issue I find over and over again made by independent authors-GREAT story premise-LOUSY EDITING. Oh, how I want to edit this book, my red pen at hand as I read it. This is a generous star rating because I initially clicked on 2 stars but felt it unfair to the author because this story premise is one of the best I've read in a while. Unique, riveting, creative, unusual, and likely a lot of research went into it as well. But there have to be at least 5 errors on every page of the book! What this author needs is a good beta reader who reads a lot of fiction, understand writing technique and I am willing, able and waiting...for free to do this! I had some issue over the heroine's sort of yo-yo behavior of the heroine toward the Hero but the Hero was true to form pretty much throughout the book. Kudos to Elsa Holland. I bought all 3 in the series based on its unique value so I am hoping the other 2 books which I haven't read yet are better edited.