I so wanted to like this story, but a few features became rapidly apparent, and that hope went out the window. The story is written single POV. Not necessarily a deal breaker for me, but in this case, it provided almost no insight into our hero, other than he grins and smirks ALOT and seemingly has no clue about people in general. A little hard to imagine of a wildly successful young business man frankly. The heroine is 22, so I'll forgive her alot, but his behaviour was entirely lacking.
No glaring typos, but an awful lot of inner monologue. Just not for me when all was said and done.
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 966 KB
- Print Length: 222 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00QCUY1NY
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 1,693 customer ratings
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #7,048 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)