Based off the first few chapters would have been excited to continue this story. Unfortunately after those the story goes down hill. It felt like the author wanted things to happen so they just did. There was almost no lead up to any event...it just happened.
Another irritation was that character development stopped making sense. You would honestly have to read it to understand as I fail to find the words to describe it.
Overall, I think if the book had received a dedicated editor this would have turned out to be a great book. Hope the author improves going forward as this is a diamond in the rough.
- Paperback: 290 pages
- Publisher: Breezy Pages Publishing (4 October 2016)
- Language: English
- ISBN-10: 0995237808
- ISBN-13: 978-0995237803
- Product Dimensions: 14 x 1.9 x 21.6 cm
- Boxed-product Weight: 440 g
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