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I wanted to like this story but it just missed the mark
18 November 2015
I wanted to like this story but it just missed the mark. I could get over the age gap, though it is quite significant, but what I couldn't get over was that there was very little of any substance actually bringing the MCs together. Insta-attraction. That's it. The characters were kinda likable but not particularly remarkable. I think the story needed more thought and a lot more editing before being published and sold.