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Didn’t live up to potential for me
19 August 2018
The story itself had so much potential and I wanted to love it, but I didn’t. I liked it.
For me, there were loose ends that weren’t tidied up and the ending felt like settling for an easy finish instead of finishing off the story properly. There were holes in the story and small things that editing could have picked up. These might not bother everyone but they bothered me enough to detract from the story and my enjoyment of reading it.