The writing is very juvenile and the characters come across as teens rather than adults. The story isn't believable or interesting.
Did a poll of around thirty men of various ages, not one of them would have used the word 'curlicue' in reference to anyone's hair, in fact only two knew the word's meaning. The author makes the men all sound like women.
None of the men I know get excited about a friend's anniversary, well, to be fair, neither do any women. An anniversary is between two people. You could be supportive, and happy to go to a party to celebrate it, but excited? Don't think that's what gets a guy excited.
Aaron is definitely not my definition of an alpha male! An alpha isn't a joiner, nor is he a follower, he's a leader. He doesn't wait for life to happen, he's decisive and a planner. This male lead is way too emo and placid to be considered Beta let alone Alpha.
There's not enough definition between the characters' voices to figure out who's speaking; I have to keep going back to the chapter title to figure it out, and I find that all of that time trying to decide who's talking is extremely disruptive to the story, such as it is.
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Finding Sunshine (Pinetree Romance) Kindle Edition
About the Author
Rene Webb, a former Catholic schoolgirl and child of the '80's, is a recovering Soap Opera addict who grew up watching General Hospital. She became weary with the relentless drama and sought out stories with happy endings that lasted. Now, Rene is an erotic romance author, where there is always a happily-ever-after! Growing up in New England, Rene spent her childhood playing make-believe, acting out stories with her Barbies, Legos, My Little Ponies, and Playmobile. She has since taken to writing down the dramas that invade her mind. Authors such as Jane Austen, Kristen Ashley, Cherise Sinclair, Sierra Cartwright, Donna Fletcher, Jennifer Ashley, and Bianca Giovanni have inspired her. They all create strong female characters, swoon-worthy men, and stories that leave their readers with the hope that you, too, will find your own H.E.A.! Rene also enjoys reading, baking, seeing movies, going to museums, and spending time with her friends and family. Rene lives in Washington DC. She is also known as Kitty Bennet, on the book blog, Lit. 4 Ladies, which she runs with her sister. --This text refers to the paperback edition.
- ASIN : B00X37L470
- Language : English
- File size : 1134 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 376 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: 1,047,704 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- Customer Reviews:
3.8 out of 5
5 global ratings