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Some great ideas here but some irritants as well
Reviewed in Australia on 6 January 2020
There's some thought provoking content but unfortunately the use of "he" and "him" distracts from the message. If you think this is a trivial matter, then I suggest you mentally replace with "she" and "her.". It would make more sense as the demographic is predominantly female as is the world population. But when you replace you can then see how jarring this is. It is not a small error but it's easily fixed. Please Greg, in this day and age we can do better.