I'm only at 30% in the book, but while the story is great it is hard to keep focusing on the story because of the many inconsistencies. Just a few examples:
It is Sara's first day of her dream job which she started one month ago.
Children do not climb on the roof of an RV, but then do climb off it.
Lonnie says the keys are in the ignition, but then takes them from the visor.
Sara parked her truck right behind the RV, but then they take the RV to drive to her truck.
Rebecca sees something, but then suddenly changes into Sara.
Rebecca is standing next to Sara, but then Sara swims back across a gap and is helped out of the water by Rebecca.
And all this in just the first one-third of the story... I fully understand that self-published authors cannot afford professional editors, but they should check their work more carefully before they ask readers to pay for it. As it is, these very frequent inconsistencies distract me from what could have been a great story.
Note: Rather ironic that the book is called Edit... ;)
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 3114 KB
- Print Length: 229 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Severed Press (3 February 2020)
- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B084GJM5JS
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 5 customer ratings
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #5,503 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)