I loved the two parts, which for future reference you could have made them both into one novel, as a free preview, Short stories are more of less a tease.
I don't think you are a bad writer, it's just your a tease and that will not get me to buy your next one because I will think its short and a waist of money.
Shame because I think these two would be great together. I can see where the story Is going from here, they both love each other, now you tossed I the other lab rat and from the writing I am guessing he will be a key player try to steal her away from the wicked, hot looking demon hunter?
In any case, that's how I see it. Love will come through, but I won't be there to see it.
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 185 KB
- Print Length: 30 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Georgia Tribell (24 June 2013)
- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B00DLUZLQE
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 4 customer ratings