I really dont think there was enough interaction between H & h to warrant the whole "I love you"! Seriously, they had about three amicable scenes together and the rest was just pure angst. So there wasn't any character development between the two. The author should have spent more time on that. The horse was a great start but that was it.
Nothing else was there to create "I love you".
And the epilogue? Would it have killed the author to write out the full delivery scene. It's one of my favorite things to see the daddy go into full blown panic throughout the delivery and this author robbed me of that.
The writing style was great and engaging. But there were so many parts that needed expanding, and this author failed to do that. So annoying. I really wanted to give this a one star but I've given it a three for the smooth writing. Contents/ plot however is a one star!
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 1288 KB
- Print Length: 298 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Little Huldra Media (22 May 2016)
- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01G1Z796U
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 115 customer ratings
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #1,742 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)