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- File Size: 349 KB
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- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B005UGEX34
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 1 customer rating
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Chuck's Erotic Stories: Monsters and Other Scary Lovers Kindle Edition
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Imaginative Stories Clumsily ExecutedReviewed in the United States on 24 January 2014
The author has some great ideas here and I like the fluidity of the characters' movement between straight and gay sex throughout the stories. However, the author doesn't support his plots with much in the way of sense or logic. He seems to have serious issues with pluralizing nouns. In fact, when a particular part of female anatomy is mentioned as if in plural, it's consistently written as singular even when expressed as a pair, almost suggesting a cyclopean condition in every female character. The narration of the stories wanders between present and past tense even in the same sentence, in defiance even of how people talk, as well as how people write. Grammar is largely abandoned in some passages. The most enjoyable story for me was the one set in Atlanta in 1855, at least until the end, which ruined it. This writer is in dire need of an editor.
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