#1: Good characters
#2: When I bought something, it was delivered promptly
#1: You miss out on a lot of story if you don't drop lots of money into this.
#2: I hate Garden Gacha. I really hate Princess Challenges. I shouldn't have to buy premium products to get to read the story. I never finished a single stupid Gacha.
#3: The story uses a ton of repetition to drag itself out. "I thought back to the conversation we had last night," or " I remember what he told me." Just write a compelling story, you don't need to drag it out.
#4: You only get to read two chapters a day. You get two tickets. That's it. Unless you want to pay for more.
#5: Why is the heroine always so surprised?? They're having sex and she is still shocked every time he touches her arm in a hallway. It's annoying.
I recommend the Lovestruck app for romance stories, and the Love Nikki Dress Up Queen app if you love free clothes and a house... they're just way better apps. I completed one story in Midnight Cinderella and couldn't wait to delete it off my Kindle.
- minor fixes