"The Burden of the Protector" is told over a series of journal entries, detailing the personal trials of Dar and his attempts to navigate the systems and cultural norms of society. It explores both compelling and complicated relationships with a handful of other characters as well as Dar's actions and motivations, using the journal mechanism to reflect and question on each.
Generally speaking, I struggle with reading from the first person perspective - but the characters, environments and conflicts are woven together skillfully, avoiding the "heavy handed" feeling I often associate with first person POV. The story jumps around a fair bit from Dar's youth to latter stages of adulthood, but not so much as to be difficult to follow. "The Burden of the Protector" is a reflection on youthful indiscretions and lamentations, scrutinized in retrospect by a character who has aged and matured.
The world S.C. Eston has crafted definitely has ample depth to work on a sequel, foreshadowing various angles of both political and societal intrigue that could make the world of Ta'Enia an interesting one to explore.
It really found its rhythm in the second half... but overall, a promising debut!
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