I bought this for Michelle Willingham's story. I enjoyed that story, although there were a number of typos that need to be corrected. The second story, by Jerrica Knight-Catania was actually my favorite though. After finishing her story, I went and looked for more by her. Unfortunately, this is the latest by her and I have the others in this series she's written. I really look forward to reading more by her. The last story, by K.C. Bateman, was extremely amateurish, especially the beginning. I almost quit reading it after the second page it was so poorly written. It did get somewhat better though, but I ended up not finishing it. I found it very boring and quite confusing at times. In just the short part I read, I had to go back and reread parts to try to figure out what was going on. The lady at one point is face down on the ground hiding under some brush, it sounds like, (when did that happen? story doesn't say) and then seems to be standing behind a tree when she's discovered. Earlier, she had seen two men with the same first name sword fighting. That was confusing knowing who was being referred to. She calls out the one man's name, yet they don't hear her. It's unclear where she is at that point, why they don't hear or see her. There's little description of the people in the last story so I couldn't really picture it as I read like I normally do when reading and the dialogue was very stilted with some modern sounding words or phrases thrown in now and then.
If I were giving stars for each story, I'd give Jerrica's 5 stars, Michelle's 4, and the last one 1.
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Breathless at the Wedding (A Summer Wedding at Castle Keyvnor Book 3) Kindle Edition
- ASIN : B0881BBDMK
- Publisher : Ava Stone Inc (22 May 2020)
- Language : English
- File size : 4574 KB
- Simultaneous device usage : Unlimited
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 256 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: 312,087 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- Customer Reviews:
4.5 out of 5
12 global ratings