A solid read, but the main character is kinda stupid. The main villain, Bloodbath, is EASILY beatable, but the character doesn't realize the weakness until like 90% into the book. Also, there's a lot of action, but there's SOOO much focus on the main character's bad knee. I get that he has an old injury that can't heal correctly since he can't have surgery, but there are braces and such that can greatly help with relieving the stress on the joint. Something else that gets under my skin is the guy can't really rely on his strength, but he never thought to develop other skills? No ranged attacks? No gun? a Bow and arrow? a spear? a sling shot? a handful of ball bearings?
Every villain in this story could have been easily overcome if White Knight just learned to think and to throw something.
The main villain generates an energy projection that leaves his body defenseless. My first thought at the initial confrontation was "why the hell is he fighting the projection when he could just smack his real body around?"
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 4172 KB
- Print Length: 151 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Sold by: Amazon Australia Services, Inc.
- Language: English
- ASIN: B075TJXKC2
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 4 customer ratings
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #864,724 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)